Young gun

This was good as a general story. Would like to see what part 3 would be like.All the best

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This story reminds me of one with a similar line,except that it was a poem. The kid was around the same age.She too was forbidden to leave the house because ...

This was a good one to read.Some excellent thinking towards the end.Also,excellent display of how young professionals have very little time to spare for family relations. I don't know how ...

Subway is amazing

So basically, it can be anything suitable for all ages?

“Unity in Diversity” is a phrase I grew up with. It meant that know matter what our race, culture, etc is, we all stand united. This is a great saying, ...

This was a fantastic piece of work. The way you enlightened us on death was very effective. I really liked these lines: When the dead know peace; the mortals cry. ...

This was a very gripping and nice story. I liked the way it was told through the voices of the survivor's.The horrid description of the disease was handled very well ...

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I liked this one right till the end.You could feel all the emotions of the speaker-Anger,helplessness,bitter nostalgia and her wish to regain her innocence. The best part of all where ...

I suppose this was written after seeing some ancient war movie...or maybe not,nevertheless,it was fine. The speaker seemed like a king looking out of his tower or a peasant looking ...

This one is a complete 10 on 10. Whenever someone passes away its is always the little kid who is still confused by what has just happened because he is ...

It would be really nice if you could give your comments on this one.Its in romantic fiction genre. Thanks.

I don't think there is much to correct as the story is pretty much perfect. I liked the word games and the mind games being played by the two.Its quite ...